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My Unforgottable Holiday

Some of you must be have interesting things to tell and in course of you had a pleasant experience even not forgotten. This time I had an unforgottable holiday. My unforgottable holiday was when I visited Borrobudur temple and Parangtritis beach. It was about two month ago, I followed one Campus Organization called MUEC ( Muhammadiyah University of English Course).

Firstly, in the sunny Sunday morning we started our trip to go to Borrobudur with other friends from MUEC. It just took about two hours from Muhammadiyah University by bus. After two hours long in the bus, finally we arrived at the first destination, Borobudur temple. We were amazed with this tremendous temple. Also we wondered how come the ancient people could build this gigantic temple without any modern tools. Then we climbed this temple up to the top. It was really exhausting. But when we reached the top, the scenery was incredibly magnificent. We could see Prambanan temple near Borobudur and other beautiful sceneries. Beside that, we were amazed with its carvings on the wall.

 I had funny experience with my team. We got assignment from MUEC. We  had to find some foreigners to talk. Actually I was afraid but I must be brave, because I want to know my english ability. After a while I found one foreigners from Canada I tried to practice my english with her. She said indonesia is one of  beautiful country in the world. There were only few tourists that we met. They were all from Australia. So, we agreed to practice our English ability with them. Although we stuttered and stumbled in the conversation, we could still understand the points. This was truly amazing. Then we took many lovely pictures there with them.

Next, we went to our next destination, that was Parangtritis beach. This beach was still natural and less pollution. We were very happy because member of MUEC made games that was great. We have to brought gravel above the feet while walking. It was very difficult, but very challenged. Although my group lose, but we were very enthusiastic. The most important of the game is the cohesiveness of a team. After that, we were playing on the seashore till we were tired.

After spending so much time in the Borrobudur temple, and Parangtritis beach. We prepared to go home. At 9.00 p.m. we arrived at home safely. I got so many beautiful experiences there. I got a lot of new friends, I got a outstanding opportunity with foreigners, and this was a holiday that will not be forgotten forever.

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Firstly, in the sunny Sunday morning we started our trip to go to Borrobudur with other friends from MUEC. It just took about two hours from Muhammadiyah University by bus. After two hours long in the bus, finally we arrived at the first destination, Borobudur temple. We were amazed with this tremendous temple. Also we wondered how come the ancient people could build this gigantic temple without any modern tools. Then we climbed this temple up to the top. It was really exhausting. But when we reached the top, the scenery was incredibly magnificent. We could see Prambanan temple near Borobudur and other beautiful sceneries. Beside that, we were amazed with its carvings on the wall.

1. Firstly, in the sunny Sunday morning we started our trip to go to Borrobudur with other friends from MUEC. It just took about two hours from Muhammadiyah University by bus.

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + V(2) + O + O

2. After two hours long in the bus, finally we arrived at the first destination, Borobudur temple.

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + V(2) + O

3. We were amazed with this tremendous temple.

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense ( passive voice )

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + to be ( were )+ V (3) + O

4. Also we wondered how come the ancient people could build this gigantic temple without any modern tools. Then we climbed this temple up to the top. It was really exhausting. But when we reached the top, the scenery was incredibly magnificent

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + V(2) + O

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + To be(was) + C

5. We could see Prambanan temple near Borobudur and other beautiful sceneries. Beside that, we were amazed with its carvings on the wall.

·         Tenses                         : Modal Auxiliaries ( Past )

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + Could + V1+ O

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense ( passive voices )

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + Tobe(were) + V3 + O (preposition)

Next, we went to our next destination, that was Parangtritis beach. This beach was still natural and less pollution. We were very happy because member of MUEC made games that was great. We have to brought gravel above the feet while walking. It was very difficult, but very challenged. Although my group lose, but we were very enthusiastic. The most important of the game is the cohesiveness of a team. After that, we were playing on the seashore till we were tired.

1. Next, we went to our next destination, that was Parangtritis beach. This beach was still natural and less pollution.

·         Tenses                         : Simple Past Tense

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + To be(was) + V2 + C

2. We were very happy because member of MUEC made games that was great. We have to brought gravel above the feet while walking. It was very difficult, but very challenged.

·         Tenses                         : Modal Auxiliaries

·         Sentence Pattern       : S+have to+V1+O

3. Although my group lose, but we were very enthusiastic. The most important of the game is the cohesiveness of a team. After that, we were playing on the seashore till we were tired.

·         Tenses                         : Past Countinuous Tense

·         Sentence Pattern       : S + were +V ing + O